Thursday, September 11, 2008

Last Week's Writing Prompt Response

Sorry for the delay in sending an idea. Hopefully you all came up with something exciting. Here's my off the cuff shot.

Prompt:

When she entered the motel room...

My sentence:

When she entered the motel room, Angel stopped short, covered her mouth and nose with her free hand and attempted to keep the contents of her stomach down as the stench that washed out of the room assailed her.

1 comments:

Denise September 11, 2008 at 4:19 PM  

I'm posting my own comment. Maybe that should be 2 sentences. :-)

When she entered the motel room, Angel stopped short. Covering her mouth and nose with her free hand, she attempted to keep the contents of her stomach down as the stench that washed out of the room assailed her.

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