Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Writing Prompt Wednesday

Prompt: The bigger man. . .


This is an interesting prompt because you know right away that there is more than one man in the character's line of site. Will you mention the other guy or will you just show us the big man? I look forward to seeing what you come up with.

4 comments:

Robin K May 12, 2010 at 11:04 AM  

The bigger man stalked down the alley after granny. Quickly gaining ground on her petite frame. His shadow grazing the grim walls. A menacing growl fills the air.

Scott Romanski May 13, 2010 at 10:37 PM  

The bigger man moved to my left. The other moved to my right. They slowly creep to opposite sides of the room, directly across from each other. I cross my arms, hands moving to my hips to grab the tsuka of both katanas. They charge me in unison.

Denise May 16, 2010 at 7:40 AM  

Oooo! Great starts and hooks. makes the reader want to continue on.

Scott Romanski May 16, 2010 at 11:26 AM  

Thanks Denise. Now i need to keep going with the scene.

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