Thursday, April 30, 2009

Response to Tuesday's Creative Writing Response

The prompt was: Her phone rang. . .

My short free write:

Her phone rang and Jane's heart stopped. It rang again and her heart jumped into action, her palms sweating. When the cell phone played the death march a third time, she swallowed the knot of fear that threatened to choke her, and pressed the talk button.

2 comments:

Ceri Hebert April 30, 2009 at 6:40 PM  

Oh!!! Who's the call from? How could you leave us there?

Denise April 30, 2009 at 7:40 PM  

LOL!

At least I had you hooked. :-)

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